Correct my essay | English homework help

can anyone correct my  ethical  essay please ?

I am already wrote it, but it is need more adding and correct the grammar


I will upload the instruction of the assignment and my work 

something you have to do 

1. correct the grammar and the formula of the sentences 

2. add more in each part ( there are 5 parts) the total writing should be 2000 words follow the instraction

3. in part 2 i wrote the 2 stories, but they need a little bit adding to be like what the teacher want add what you think it right to make the part correct

4. parts 4 and 5 need more work and adding 

thank you so much